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Rickman
 Post subject: "Beware Evil's Eye"
PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 4:30 pm 
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Beware Evil's Eye
With all your might my friend.
If you fail you'll die
When I count to ten.

notice how each line has ABOUT 5 silables
tell me if you like it.

The moral is:
avoid sainten (the devil) and his tricks and you'll be fine

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 Post subject: Re: "Beware Evil's Eye"
PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 8:00 pm 
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Line 2 has like 8 syllables. XD

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 Post subject: Re: "Beware Evil's Eye"
PostPosted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:48 am 
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XD lolololol dude friends has 2 sylibles, Rickman you failure!!!

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 Post subject: Re: "Beware Evil's Eye"
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Seth.D wrote:
Line 2 has like 8 syllables. XD


I counted 6 syllables in the 2nd line.

Anyways, it's not 5!
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 Post subject: Re: "Beware Evil's Eye"
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just pretend it has 5 syllables like the others. Your exspose to enjoy it, not look for errors. X(

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